Skit #2: Fanservice Help-out gone WRONG..!

[aiko_chan]

Here's a new one that was recent made.....due to lack of sleep, pockey, soda, SNOW and fanservice vids....and my cousin's friend and his friend being gay... *giddy ^^* Here's the short list of people in order:
Gackt: Chris
Kanon: Kensuke
Bou: Sashi (the kickass individual :D)
Nekochan: cousin bri (the other kickass individual...)
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Skit #2: Fanservice Help-out gone WRONG..!
people: Gackt, Bou, Kanon, Nekochan.
Mission: To get gackt to enjoy and like STRAIGHT fanservice....but you know it will never work anyways....

skit:

GACKT: I will not let you make me enjoy those....STRAIGHT things in fanservice and jrock life!
KANON: Well, theres nothing really that we can do anymore, he's the one who's saying that he doesnt choose to like it. just leave him alone.
BOU: HELL NO. Neko chan!!! hayaku~
NEKO: Yo~ you called??
BOU: commere. (sly side look)
NEKO: (walk over jitterly scared a little.) Hai? whatcha like?
BOU: Kiss Gackt.
KANON: I....uh...I'll DO IT!
BOU & NEKO: WTF..??!??!??!??!?!???1?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!? (one one one one one. sry, couldnt resist the urge! XD)
KANON: I said that I'd do it, so i will.
BOU: hold it hold it. STOP BEING GAY!! .............thats my job. :D
KANON & GACKT: (fall over / sweatdrop) uhhh.....
NEKO: its lunch time, wanna go get some ramen?
BOU: shoots.
KANON: what about us?????
GACKT: Yeah! what he said!!
BOU: You said you wanted to kiss him. So be my guest. i highly recommend it....personally. (wink and look at gackt)
KANON: what did you two do???
GACKT: oh nothing ^^'
KANON: right...
NEKO: Have fun love birds! =^____________^=
(neko and bou walk outside)
NEKO: So...what did you two do??
BOU: He fed me...
NEKO: Fed you how?
BOU: Mouth to mouth.
NEKO: (FALL OVER!!!!!!) GAH. >>' thats why he was always close to you?????
BOU: maybe..... ^^ (whistles) why are you looking at me like that???
NEKO: YOU ARE ODD.
BOU: thats me ^^'
-inside where gackt and kanon are-
KANON: So...uh.....wanna go already?
GACKT: im getting hungry. Treat me to food kanon-sama!!! ^^
KANON: Fine fine. here's $10. go get something from the food court.
GACKT: yay!! (kiss kanon on cheek) domoooo~ <3 (prances off)
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PART2 coming soon!!!!!!!!!
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i hope...j/k!! :D

[Eleryth]

I'm honestly really confused. The only name I've heard of before is Gackt, and I wouldn't know what type of fanservice he likes, if he's even into it. I personally find that the random bits of Japanese throw off the flow. I think it's better to stick to just English (or else it comes across as "fangirly", which may not be your intention).

Who are these other people? Why are they "gay"?
Is the "feeding mouth to mouth" really necessary? All I thought of was a mama bird feeing her chicks. :/ Probably not the image you want to give the people.
Is the "feed me food!" the punchline? Or the "fine, here's money?" *confuzzled*

Think of who will see this skit. Will people who know nothing about jrock (people like myself) understand your skit? The best skits have universal appeal. What's the punchline? Focus on that - and it should usually come near the end.

[ManWitch]

First off, I can honestly say that I have never understood in the slightest bit any skit in this forum that is introduced with "this was made due to lack of sleep, pockey, sugar...etc". I'm in the same boat as Eleryth with not understanding who the characters are aside from Gackt. A good idea would be to not have the skit be about who the characters are as much as what the characters are doing. You can't assume that everyone will already know the background of the characters so doing so will leave a lot of people in the dark (myself included). From what I can gather about the skit...it might work just as well if you all just walk on stage and start making out with each other.

[lady_artemis]

I'm sorry if I'm incorect, but I'm pretty sure that Bou (from An Cafe, no?) is mouth fed by Teruki, not Kannon... but oh well. And wouldn't fanservice be gay if it were between Gackt and Kannon? o.0 I'm sort of confused... Interesting idea but I don't think the majority of masqurade veiwers would enjoy it due to how little most know of Jrock...

[CherryBomb]

Things like winking and sweat drops won't be noticed on stage! Do something that won't involve so much talking since the sound usually sucks in the audience.