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Holierthanthou
02-02-2012, 12:18 PM
This is my fist try at photography, what do you guys think?

http://xabbichanx.deviantart.com/?tab=gallery&id=35088412&offset=0

wasabiprodution
02-02-2012, 01:11 PM
This is my fist try at photography, what do you guys think?

http://xabbichanx.deviantart.com/?tab=gallery&id=35088412&offset=0

For your first try they are pretty good, the only thing that doesnt sit right with me is that the photos are over exposed a bit, to the point where your losing detail on the shirt and its blending in with the wall. May I say what camera was used?

All in all I like them.

Holierthanthou
02-02-2012, 06:44 PM
For your first try they are pretty good, the only thing that doesnt sit right with me is that the photos are over exposed a bit, to the point where your losing detail on the shirt and its blending in with the wall. May I say what camera was used?

All in all I like them.

Thanks~ I used my iPhone's camera and put them through a couple of photo editing apps :3

wasabiprodution
02-02-2012, 07:00 PM
oh cool. "the best camera is the one you have with you" - Chase jarvis

Over9000images
03-03-2012, 02:04 AM
This is my fist try at photography, what do you guys think?

http://xabbichanx.deviantart.com/?tab=gallery&id=35088412&offset=0

If you were less holy than me, I would be able to critique it, but unfortunately...

brucer007
03-17-2012, 07:51 AM
Your degree of Holiness has no barring on my ability to critique your photography.

I saw 3 images. They were similar, but you did some interesting post processing to make each portrait have a distinguished look. I would say your work is not mainstream, but it is edgy, and daring. I think there is a good place for photographers who color outside the lines. As cosplay photography, the changing eye colors seems wacky, without knowing anything about the character. Perhaps that is something she can do...or she just likes wearing different contact lenses (even though I suspect that was done in editing).

Missi
03-27-2012, 03:02 PM
not to repeat others but good start just watch your exposure!

Over9000images
04-09-2012, 12:33 AM
This is my fist try at photography, what do you guys think?

http://xabbichanx.deviantart.com/?tab=gallery&id=35088412&offset=0

Well, in this case, high key isn't ideal for the image, and imo, the eye manipulation is just too fake looking. But keep at it.