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DJ(SiC)ness
11-25-2002, 01:00 AM
Im a musician and i love writing songs and poems
I think that there has already been a Poetry thread but what the hell here is a new one, but i would also like to see some songs some of you wrote.

here is a song i have just recently wrote, im working one the music to it now.

Its kinda mellow and with a strong bass flow until the Chorus, thats when the instruments really pick up and gains alot of technical druming.

I don't have a title yet maybe you guys could help me pick one?

here it is


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I sit upon the roof top of my self irritation
pointing the finger at the aligations
that I have made of my peers, who
rotted away before they have died
before they have lived
I have made the choices that will shape my world
that will shape yours, a ranting pure world
that you do discuss ,
I just push it away with my blasphemy
I tear the cyst away from what truly makes me
the piles of lies , the wrong but right bureaucracy
that has turned into a underground dictatorship
between the rich and the poor
mother tell me what to be
a lost soul lost in a sea that has torn away
I sit and wait of the destruction that my salvation will soon take

[chorus} I stand under one law, we have lost it all!
stand your ground I really dare you too
show me the fools that the trademark has branded you!
your bold pathetic lives have seen you threw!
stand alone face the future
for I stand at the gate to welcome you!
lost children from near and far
follow my voice
just follow the pain
-of

it has gone one, one minute to long
but I want to stay, stay threw the dark
I want to be the last one
I want to see it threw
I want to see you
screw you all, hell is coming all to break
the true sign, the destruction waits
but I have lost it all in my mind
my mind, my souls, my eyes
but my inner me, sifts and pulls at my hereticy
show me what I can bring to this world that will change
to even attempt to better be
my world!

[chorus} I stand under one law, we have lost it all!
stand your ground I really dare you too
show me the fools that the trademark has branded you!
your bold pathetic lives have seen you threw!
stand alone face the future
for I stand at the gate to welcome you!
lost children from near and far
follow my voice
just follow the pain
-of

-have I truly lost it all.....
my eyes they weren’t what they were before...
the mime in the mirror is still taunting me...
for I'm not flawless, but hell you all should be...
I am the rag doll, the endless royally screwed up end result of society


[chorus} I stand under one law, we have lost it all!
stand your ground I really dare you too
show me the fools that the trademark has branded you!
your bold pathetic lives have seen you threw!
stand alone face the future
for I stand at the gate to welcome you!
lost children from near and far
follow my voice
just follow the pain
-of
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thank you
~DJ

Squall-chan
11-25-2002, 01:07 AM
Thats awesome...keep up the good work DJ. :D