This pose is epic! I've only seen a little bit of Naruto so I can't say much, but I love the whole look and feel of this OC and it looks like you really took your time to develop your character in terms of backstory.
He would work well in a fighting game with weapons! Great original cosplay!
This costume in general is pretty epic - you made great choices in colours and but your ideas together really well
Great cosplay idea and backstory! You really pulled together an awesome cosplay (and posing is epic)!
I like the design of your naruto OC. At first glance it seems overly modern and out of place in that universe, but I can totally see an entire faction of green+black Sam Fisher like ninjas running around now.