I think the overall construction is really good. SO happy that you didn't have tons of lace all over it. The headdress is cute and not too big. OMG I LOVE THE SHOES!
Some critiques. Do something with you hair. It's just laying there and blocking part of your face. Ditch the pink parasol. It clashes with your outfit. And it's not really a soft pink either. I think you should of gone with a smaller statin ribbon.Like 4/3 or 1/2 the size.And the lace looks pretty cheap.So your torso is drowing under all the ribbon and lace. Next time use either cluny,eyelet, or venise lace.
As a first try, it looks awesome and keep working on coordinating and material choice.