ha ha Id already copied a photo of your outfit from someone else's photos of the event (sorry i cant remember where i got it from). I love the dress design and now i hear it was your first attempt im seriously impressed. the way the skirt hangs is gorgeous. a good choice of fabric.
I wont claim to be an expert on Lolita style rules but personally I love the shoes. I quite like seeing different shoe styles with Lolita and I think yours complement the outfit well. Im not sure whether peep toes are considered a bit risky for loli (but between you and me, rules aside, you look adorable).
If that was outfit No.1 i can wait to see outfit No.2.