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Unread 10-02-2012, 03:07 PM   #6
Lilith Oya
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I thought this was awesome! As someone who has organized and executed a dance skit, I know how hard this can be!

I actually think that the change in music is part of the comedy. You had a spoken intro and a spoken punch line which explains all the silliness. It's hard to mesh characters and I like the approach you took. A lot of people do the, hey how do we get home? I know we should dance! And it makes no sense. Not that skits have to make complete sense, but the "story" you added explains the entire few minutes you're on stage!
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