Originally Posted by thatgalsagenius
I think it looks great construction wise! The ends of the sleeves and the hem of the shirt could be done differently (without the roll effect) however as you haven't provided reference pictures I am not entirely sure. ^_^
I have to disagree with the rolls part. The "v" on top of the skirt and the shoulder parts are suppose to be rolled like that.
The thing I am noticing however is that there are 3 rolls on the shoulders..Yours has only 2..Unless you are planning to make the version where they have the transparant 3rd one that looks weird..I don't know the name of it..