Well, not gonna lie here...This could be better made..The tunic looks just fine, but I can't tell if you make a colar like his or not..Also the bottom should be a little longer..Since he is a dude his tunic has to be long enough to not look like a miniskirt..lol..Also, as mentioned, the hair..Need's be blonde..If you dont want to bleach, I suggest a wig. I can suggest a specific one if you like..
Now, the belt going over the shoulder..I see it's not a real belt. It's more a strap with a fake buckle..And it looks just that..Fake. This could easily be made out of vinyl and a real buckle with little work. The pouches can be made with the same stuff if you want. It would match.
I can't see the gloves well enough to say anything..The boot covers look great. I like them a lot.
Cosplay DA Regular DA
-Fate Testarossa (Mahou Shojo Lyrical Nanoha A's) ~90%-
-Ryouko Ookami (Ookami san and her 7 companions) ~75%
-Amy Sorel (Soul Calibur) 25%-