I think you need something a little lighter and a little closer to your skin. it looks kind of grey-ish to me, but it could be the lighting in the picture.
Use the very tip of your mascara brush to apply a light coat to your bottom lashes, and if you want use some eyeliner on the bottom lid.
I think you should really work on your lips more. They look thin and not really feminine, I think they should be a little fuller.