First off, your eye makeup has definitely improved! And yes, the white eyeliner can go in the inner part, or along the waterline.
1) Your foundation is looking cakey. I wonder if it's too dry for your skin. Or you've applied too much powder. Do you prep your skin with primer or lotion? This may help.
2) The cheek contour extends too far down. Here's a great video
which explains the "magic" contour line.
Don't worry about the lips. It happens!