Alrighty Thank you! I'll have it noted on the next photoshoot I have.
Actually I think that might on my end of the editing, because after going through the process of editing there was a lot of graininess to the picture. So what I did was I removed the noise to it and I think that's where it lost it's sharpness.
Oh another thing a friend of mine told me I had too much contrast on my last photoshoot I did with my same friend here, so this is where I got a little too careful with the contrasting which I think you might be right looking a little dull.
Thank you for the Critiques, I'll have them noted with me.