Are you sure that's a tabard? It looks like it's all part of the dress to me.
Edit: I just noticed, and I'm not sure if this is just because the 'tabard' is indeed bunched up over your chest, but it looks like the upper bit and the lower bit are too far apart? If that makes any sense. On the picture there's a very slim line of green between the brown chest part and the brown bits sticking up above the belt. I think trying to slim that distance down could do much for the overall look of the dress.
"'Twas brillig, and the slithy toves
Did gyre and gimble in the wabe:
All mimsy were the borogoves,
And the mome raths outgrabe."
Last edited by Ink : 02-06-2013 at 12:29 AM.