It looks great
I think the suggestions are probably the only things I could come up with. If you don't want to dirty it up I think that's pretty cannon too...Elizabeth's clothes get dirtier as the game goes on, but in the beginning hers are pristine. So I'd say that's a personal choice because it isn't exactly inaccurate to have it looking crisp. I imagine he was pretty sharp looking when he first got to Columbia...
Really nice work
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been there, done that [100%]: [Silent Hill] [Kingdom Hearts 1 & 2 & Birth By Sleep]
in the works: lots of Silent Hill stuff, Bakemonogatari, Gun & Die buster, PSG
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