@darknessinzeros You are definitely on the right track. I believe you have done very well honestly and you are nearly there. Some thoughts, the female face is all about contrast
. The eyes are the first place we look and are the most feminine feature of a face. Shade those eyebrows to be darker than the hair. Work on shading the eyes - look up the makeup thread here and youtube Michelle Phan (I'm on my phone so can't link you). Shade, blend, repeat! You are almost there, once you work on getting the makeup right here you will pass.
the cheek and lip contouring you have is great as well as the eyebrow shape, well done so far.