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Unread 06-12-2012, 06:00 PM   #1
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Time skip nami one piece

need some help with ideas for the white to add to the top but i think i did a good job any tips or ideas id love more input thanks as always ^^

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Unread 06-12-2012, 07:06 PM   #2
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First thing that jumped out was the lack of stripes on the bikini top. Second, well...ummm... your fake boob is showing.
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Unread 06-12-2012, 07:23 PM   #3
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ya not much i can do about the fake bewbs showing i blend it in as best as i can with concealer and makeup the amount of ppl i trapped was amazing they look real till you get rather close
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Unread 06-14-2012, 12:29 AM   #4
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I was going to say the stripes missing and the boob as well.

But also, shoes? Having actual bangs styled into the wig. The ring in that picture looks green, not clear. I would also try to get an actual gold bracelet of some sort. Maybe a pair of pants that doesn't have the cowboy drawing in the back too, just a blank pair of jeans (unless she has that on her jeans, can't see her butt) Super nit picky things, though.
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Unread 06-14-2012, 01:49 AM   #5
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i have the orange high heels only pic ive found out of like 100 taken happens to be the only one with heels off >.< styling the bangs i like that idea thank you ill work on that as for the globe its clear just the picture makes it look green also have the gold bracelet and ya i was thinking about detreading the pants of the mark thanks for all the input tho makira every little bit help i will try and style her bangs tho never thought about that
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Unread 06-14-2012, 02:49 AM   #6
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Bwuhahahah. No worries. I did that with my Yoko cosplay that didn't have chopsticks. You're welcome It does look great though
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