Honestly, It looks a little clumpy. I think you could have easily made this out of transparent plastic sheets. Like acrylic I think is what it is. I know somewhere you can buy them in the colors you need. Then just cut the shape out. But for the way you did it, It's still actually pretty good.
Cosplay DA Regular DA
Kumoricon 2014 (so far):
-Sora (Kingdom Hearts 2)
-Alice (Hearts no Kuni no Alice)
-Black&Blue Loli-style Dark Magical Girl O.C.
-Akaito (Vocaloid. Black & Red Ver.)
Dream cosplays for now:
-Tsuruya-san (Haruhi Suzumiya)
-Kagami Hiiragi (Lucky Star)