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[Kaitlyn Meakin]

So I made an Okami cosplay for Cos & Effect 2012 based on a junihitoe and the original artwork from Amaterasu.

Here's my concept art: http://shattered-moonlight.deviantar...ath=/#/d55ek38

Here's the original piece:http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__...uiOkamiden.jpg

And this is what I created: http://www.cosplay.com/photo/3276659/
http://www.cosplay.com/photo/3276947/
http://www.cosplay.com/photo/3277428/
http://www.cosplay.com/photo/3276658/


Please give me feed back in this piece.

[StabbityBlkMage]

All deadlinks. Probably need to set the photo's privacy settings to public.

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I think it looks amazing! I want to do a gijinka of Gekigami (the tiger brush god). I just need to wait until I finalize things on the house me and my fiance are buying since my sewing machine is all put away and I have no room to sew in the tiny place we're styaing now. ;-;

[StabbityBlkMage]

There we go! Yeah coscom photos work better than FB lol.

Yeah you can tell that a lot of time was put into the linework on the sleeves. It all came together really well, makeup, wig and costume.

Sorry I don't have any input on improvements, I'm not strong in sewing but I enjoyed looking at it a lot!

[Kaitlyn Meakin]

Originally Posted by StabbityBlkMage

There we go! Yeah coscom photos work better than FB lol.

Yeah you can tell that a lot of time was put into the linework on the sleeves. It all came together really well, makeup, wig and costume.

Sorry I don't have any input on improvements, I'm not strong in sewing but I enjoyed looking at it a lot!

Thank you so much for the input, it helps more than you think.

[Penlowe]

lovely! clean lines, great fit to your body, tidy finish and assembly, well proportioned accessories and hair.
The only critique I can offer- and it is very minor- is you opted to do rolled hems on the sleeve edges. Granted, there are a lot of them, but doing a proper cuff or even using a matching bias tape to create an ultra smooth line (like you got on your front closure with the red line) would make the difference between "wow! she made a great costume!" and "woah... professional costume incoming.. wish I could afford to pay someone for that" very nice work.

[Kaitlyn Meakin]

Originally Posted by Penlowe

lovely! clean lines, great fit to your body, tidy finish and assembly, well proportioned accessories and hair.
The only critique I can offer- and it is very minor- is you opted to do rolled hems on the sleeve edges. Granted, there are a lot of them, but doing a proper cuff or even using a matching bias tape to create an ultra smooth line (like you got on your front closure with the red line) would make the difference between "wow! she made a great costume!" and "woah... professional costume incoming.. wish I could afford to pay someone for that" very nice work.

Thanks you so much, I plan to remake this cosplay somewhere down this line and I'll keep that in mind.

[Kaitlyn Meakin]

Just giving this a little bump to get a few more critiques.