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Unread 10-30-2012, 03:23 PM   #1
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Femzee - first completed cosplay!

Hey guys!
so last year I tried to do a cosplay but it still isnt complete (sailor moon) but i will try to finish that for sakuracon....
anyways, this is my first offical cosplay i think. I wore it to aki con and spent quite a bit of time on it!
any critiques on how to make it better?
also, I had armsocks on but they were quite a pain! i think it was the long nails I had on them,
it was hard to grab anything and just annoying!
I may take the nails off or file them down a lot.
Here are pictures! Im the girl on the far left.

Also, I know many don't like the homestuck fandom at cons, and if you are going to be rude please don't comment thank you!
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Unread 11-17-2012, 03:46 AM   #2
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wow, that's really good for a first cosplay! The horns and makeup turned out really well. I like that you kept it fairly accurate to the original outfit (some genderbends end up being...er...skimpier.)
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Unread 11-17-2012, 01:37 PM   #3
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sooo cute lol only thing i would say is maybe darken the makeup colors a tiny bit.... the base seems a little too white and not enough gray. otherwise frikin gorgeous!
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Absolutely adorable!!!!

I agree with maybe darkening the grey bits some more, but other than that its great! I love it!
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Unread 12-10-2012, 12:58 AM   #5
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I can't really comment on the accuracy of the cosplay since I don't follow the series (though it looks pretty well put together), but I was wondering how you did the horns, specifically how you mounted them? I'm making some for a friend who is a huge Homestuck fan, and I am a little unsure how to mount them that they'll be light and comfortable.
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Unread 12-22-2012, 11:54 PM   #6
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the horns are a little small for your head but great cosplay all around
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Unread 12-29-2012, 07:14 PM   #7
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I think this is an adorable idea, however, I would agree that you need to darken your make-up a bit. Especially around the eyes..

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