For a closet thing, it isn't bad. I recommend going and getting some red boots, preferably a coat instead of a shirt, and the design tacked onto that. The plain red shirt/black pants wouldn't look like anything if you didn't have the spear TBH. Not to be mean, but just some constructive criticism.
The genderbelt picture is actually really ideal to what I imagine for him.
Cosplay 1: Sailor Venus (Commissioner failed to make 4 month deadline)
Update: August 10th.... still nothing.
Reality: Recycled or no cosplay at all. Got to love commissioning! Thanks everyone!! Serious thanks to Dulcinea, who actually made the deadline for the accessories far in advance and of outstanding quality. Sucks they won't be used.