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Unread 03-12-2013, 10:37 PM   #1
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Sayaka Miki

Hi I just wanted a critique on anything that I could fix up or add to make this costume better.
Here is how she looks
http://omoshiroi.info/wp/wp-content/...ime_Design.jpg

and here is me in the costume also please suggest poses that I can do as well in this costume thank you.
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Unread 03-13-2013, 02:41 AM   #2
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The box pleats on the skirt look great, and the colour choices seem about right. The only thing that looks like it could use some improvement is the fitting of the tube-top bra bit. It appears to be binding your chest down and compressing the ladies, where in the character ref it appears to have more give. The fabric in the character ref also appears to have a slight sheen to it. If you were to make a new bra bit that was strategically pleated to fit the ladies, I think this would be complete.
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Unread 03-13-2013, 11:39 AM   #3
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I love your wig!! But, I agree with Noose that your top seems a little tight. Also I would be careful to make sure that your bellybutton and soul gem are shown. I really love your color choices. Also it's hard to see in the images, but is your skirt cut at an angle? I think that's something that's really important in this character design. Also, pose wise I'd suggest a smile or two. (:

This is a great outfit! With a few tweaks it will be amazing!! (:
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Unread 03-13-2013, 09:49 PM   #4
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yeah it is cut at angle and for the top part I actually ended up gaining 10 lbs before my con and I'm working very hard to try and loose it before my next con lol. That's why it's so tight and if not I'm going to have to add onto it in the back since it wont be noticeable.
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Unread 03-13-2013, 10:19 PM   #5
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Overall the costume looks really nice, and well made! I agree with the fitting of the top-- it's making you look more like a boy than a cute boy, which is never fun! I would also like to see the jewel thing on the stomach better-- but that's nit picking.
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