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Unread 04-19-2013, 05:28 PM   #1
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Any suggestions to make this look better?

This is my Elizabeth dress, I based it more off of Ormeli's then off of the game's because I think Ormeli's was the original design before they altered the game.

Anyways, just looking for some suggestions to make it better, more perfect?
And and first thoughts?

Ormeli's http://fashionablygeek.com/wp-conten...418.jpg?cb5e28

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Unread 04-21-2013, 12:07 AM   #2
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Any chance for some larger pictures, they seem to be very thumbnail size and as a result it is hard to tell.
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Unread 04-21-2013, 09:47 AM   #3
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Yes! Sorry about that, I'm such a newb..














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Unread 04-21-2013, 09:51 AM   #4
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Oh, I have no idea how to edit previous posts so I could just delete the others and fix the original. I ended up just posting links to the pictures , I know that sucks..just not sure how to fix it just yet.
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Unread 04-21-2013, 02:14 PM   #5
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From the front it looks very nice but from the back the shrug jacket looks too bulky and big on you. If you can I would take it in a bit more so it hugs your upper torso more. Or perhaps it's the upper arms that are too big? The first picture is what I'm going off of.

Other than that you look really good! (Even if you don't tweak the shrug jacket you'll still look awesome.)
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I agree, the jacket isn't 'snug' enough (both around the body and the arms) and the bottom of the dress is to frilly.
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Thank you guys so much! I will revamp those.
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I'm no expert on fabric so don't take my word seriously as this is just my opinion.

As mentioned above it seemed wrinkly and bulky. Something about the color texture seem too rigid and hard rather then a smoother feel to it.
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