I'll come from two different points on this one, from both a photographer and cosplayer.
As the photographer, I would of cropped a potion of the top part of the photo, maybe to just above the bike, then crop the bottom up to your butt, and finally I would of cropped out the people on the right. I would do this because you are the focal point, and there is no need for the extra people in the photo. I can tell you are the focal point since the rest of the people in the first photo are a little blurred out. In the second photo, I wouldn't really post it unless you are absolutely in love with it. To me, there are too many lines that drag my attention away from you and down to the bottom of the photo, leaving nothing to bring my attention back up, not to mention the posts with the chains connecting them in the distance. However, if I was obligated to post the photo, I'd of cropped everything but you and maybe a little less to show you were sitting on something.
As the cosplayer. In the first photo, all I could nit pick on is posture, but I have the same problem to. Maybe you could turn your head a little more dramatically, maybe even to where we can see some of the nose. That might cause you sit more awkwardly, but I learned from a fellow model years ago that if you feel weird or uncomfortable when doing a pose 9 times out of 10 it's going to look better when the photo is taken. In the second photo, yeah the posture monster strikes again. Other then that, it seems fine to me, I like the pose for this one. If I HAD to pick something wrong with you, I'd nit pick on the icicles on the hoodie. Coming from an artistic point of view and I know the character design rather well, you really want the icicles to really stand out, but you also want it to be true to you as the artist. I've seen millions (ok not really millions) of Jack Frost cosplays, and the one thing that pulls the costume together is the icicles on the hoodie. Plus it looks like your sleeves are too long, but that's mom's 2 cents cause she's a professional tailor of like 40+ years.
But yeah, this is prolly a wall of text. Over all, I like the direction it's going. If you ever need help with poses or how to pose or what works well for you talk to fellow cosplayers. I've learned cool tips and tricks over the last year I've cosplayed from just talking to people and then developing my own style from what I've learned. And this is coming from 8 years of modeling and 7 years of photography.
Last edited by MissLumetta : 11-19-2013 at 09:14 PM.