From the pictures you posted I can say i like your clouds on the jacket should be little bigger and not as spaced out. In most of your pictures one cloud showed up and one cloud only. There should be more then just one cloud showing from a straight on shot.
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I agree with the eye peice. I'm no prop master so I can't help you on how to fix it but it looks rough and too big.
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