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[Akatsuki2008]

okay yes, this is my second thread up here and I know I shouldn't have started a new one but I find it pointless to post these ideas on that other thread. Anyway I got to thinking and came up with a couple of skit idea's, I have titles and short descriptions of them all, and the scripts to two of them, I will post them later. Anyway here are the titles and what not:

1.Deidara's Sadness, Sasori-danna isn't returning
Description: Deidara has just learned that his danna won't be returning to the Akatsuki. Itachi finds him in a rather sensitive state and tries without much success to cheer him up.... now what does Tobi want?

2. Heart Stew
Description: Axel is hungry and so are some others, after disagreeing on just about everying, Roxas suggests Heart Stew, which everyone agrees on. But how did one go about making heart stew?

3. Convincing Roxas
Description: Axel tries convincing Roxas to return to Castle Oblivion with him. He reluctantly agrees and Axel sneaks him in only to be stopped by the others and each time having to hide Roxas. Xemnas finally catches him and lectures him, telling him to destroy the traitor. When Axel refuses, Xemnas takes things into his own hands...

4. Itachi's Punishment
Description: Itachi is captured and Tsunade must decide his punishment. Just before she can, Sasuke intervenes and puts his two cents in...

5. Axel's Punishment
Description: Axel must be punished for disobeying Xemnas' order to eliminate Roxas. The others begin suggesting strange things, can a punishment be decided upon?

6. Torn Beliefs
Description: Sasuke recieves a late night visit from Itachi. Far from wanting a fight, Itachi has come to discuss the past and future of the Uchiha Clan. Sasuke is soon torn between his original beliefs and the new ones created by Itachi's words...

yes the descriptions sound like story summarys but that is because I write alot of stories in my free time. Anyway, any feedback is welcom, and suggestions on anything too, I will post the scripts for Deidara's Sadness, Sasori-danna isn't returning and Heart Stew at a later time

[Illa Scriptor]

1. Deidara's Sadness- it sounds like a good idea, but I wouldn't recommend it for only one reason- what happens to Sasori is a major spoiler and therefore ruin that plot point for many fans who haven't reached that part in the series yet.

2. Heart Stew- sounds good (and funny) so far!

3. Convincing Roxas- this one could swing either way. With all the lecturing and convincing, this could very easily be boring- but if you keep it fast paced and well choreographed, the ending with Xemnas trying to destroy Roxas could be EPIIIIC.

4. Itachi's Punishment- also sounds good, and potentially very funny.

5. Axel's Punishment- same as number 4.

6. Torn Beliefs- hm, sounds interesting. The same goes as with 3, though- you've got to have tight dialogue to keep the audience's attention span from drifting.

All in all, these are some pretty great ideas. At this point, it all comes down to the script.

[Akatsuki2008]

thank you for your reply, sorry it's taken so long for me to see this my internet has been down for some time

[Akatsuki2008]

Heart Stew
Axel: Jeez, I’m hungry! What about you, Roxy?
Roxas: Same here, let’s go see if there’s any food to eat. –Go down to the ‘kitchen’ and are joined by Larxene, Marluxia, Demyx, and Zexion-
Larxene: Hey, where’s all the chocolate at? If one of you ate it you’re dead!
Axel: Sorry, Roxy and I ate the last of it yesterday.
Larxene: You’re so lucky right now, Axel, if it weren’t for the fact that we needed you two you’d be dead.
Marluxia: Are any of the apples good?
Roxas: Eww, these are from like last month or something, they’re all rotten!
Demyx: Yes! Bottled water…. Oh, but it’s empty. Who drank it? I was saving this.
Larxene: -raises hand- My bad, I didn’t know –smirks-
Zexion: How about we just have some Ramen?
All: No!
Roxas: Oh, I know, let’s have Heart Stew!
Marluxia: What is Heart Stew? It sounds disgusting. –Makes a face-
Roxas: It’s really not, I mean it sounds and looks a bit gross but it’s really delicious!
Axel: How exactly do you make Heart Stew?
Marluxia: You read my mind, Axel.
Demyx: Well, we obviously need a heart.
Zexion: Where would we find one? Especially this time of day. And I for one don’t feel like chasing down Heartless.
Larxene: Nor do I. I just got my nails done.
Marluxia: How do we know that’s the truth? You’re always wearing gloves –Larxene stomps her feet and glares-
Zexion: Could there be one lying around the castle? –All think-
Demyx: Oh, I know where one is!
All: Where?
Demyx: Uh…. I forgot? –Shrugs and hangs head-
Axel: Let’s go look for it. –All search-
Roxas: Found it! –Jumps up-
Larxene: Where was it?
Roxas: Next to Demyx’s secret stash of Pockey –looks at Demy-
Demyx: We all have secrets –looks at Axel and Roxas-
Larxene: Let’s start cooking –all begin preparing food-
Marluxia: Why couldn’t we have eaten the Pockey?
Demyx: Touch my stash and I’ll make sure you drown in the pool, plant man.
Marluxia: Your arm would be gone before you could even reach your Sitar –glare-
Axel: Knock it off, the foods ready.
Zexion: That looks gross, even for me.
Demyx: Who wants to try it first? –Nervous glance-
All: Larxene.
Larxene: Me? Why me?!
Roxas: Well, I’ve had it before and you normally try everything first.
Larxene: If I get sick, you’re paying for a new uniform –tries it and makes a face- Well, surprisingly it’s actually good. –All try and agree-
Axel: Maybe we should have Roxy cook more often.
Roxas: That’s all I know how to make. –Laughs-
Marluxia & Zexion: Sure, that’s why you always have great food.
Demyx: Here comes Superior –everyone hides stuff-
Xemnas: what is going on in here?
Axel: Nothin’, we’re just talkin’.
Xemnas: Enough chit-chat, you have work to do. Heartless have been spotted in Atlantica, the Keyblade Master is sure to follow, now go.
Demyx: Yes!
Axel: -eye twitches- Of all the places…. I hate water! –All exit stage except Larxene-
Larxene: -pulls Pockey out- I wonder what Pockey tastes like dipped in Heart Stew? –Shrugs and leaves-

yes its long and I need to edit it badly, I have a bad habit of writing more than I should. I'm sorry for double posting but its just in my nature to have people look over something and give feedback before I put it in motion