not a bad drawing. tho there could be a few small things that could be altered...ur forearm is a bit straight (like more of a retagular with a few curves) needs desend when getting to the wrist. and ur ear could be just a bit bigger......
but other than a few misses ur friend did well on getting u onto paper.
With nothing to fight her with, he got into a defensive stance, only showing one side towards her. When he looked at her she was…isn’t she? Yes, she was, Dreyia was laughing at him. She had that soul ripping, evil laugh. She was, again, mocking him for being weak. He hated it with a passion.
-only those willing to die for what they lost to her, will face her. She is death. She is desire. She is what makes this world hell to those creatures.