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Unread 07-21-2009, 10:57 AM   #1
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Wonder Woman

What I already know: lips not red enough, and eyebrows need darkening, belt is a bit different.


link to costume: http://www.cosplay.com/costume/235184/

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http://smg.photobucket.com/albums/v3...017a830a39.jpg

http://smg.photobucket.com/albums/v3...der-woman7.jpg


http://smg.photobucket.com/albums/v3...current=46.jpg

http://smg.photobucket.com/albums/v3...-woman-dcu.jpg

http://smg.photobucket.com/albums/v3...costume_sm.jpg
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Unread 07-21-2009, 12:06 PM   #2
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Along with what you mentioned, in the second picture she is wearing eyeliner and mascara, so you could try that out.
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Unread 07-21-2009, 02:53 PM   #3
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hm, I notice the top is seperate from the bottoms. maybe try getting a swimsute pattern and just add bonning to the top. That way the belt doesn't look all wonky trying to hid the gap between the two.
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Unread 07-21-2009, 03:03 PM   #4
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other than what you said, i think the star on your crown could be bigger. and we should be able to see more of your shorts. the belt in the references looks like it's at the waist. the boots COULD be higher but that's not really an issue. it's a really good costume though! good work! i especially love the gauntlets.

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btw for the red lips if you're interested i use maybelline's moisture extreme in either real raisin or go currant. they've both got bluish undertones so they look really good on a lot of people. they last fairly well given their price as well. it's even better if you use their wine colored lip liner. i'm wearing the real raisin in my avatar.
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Unread 07-21-2009, 04:07 PM   #5
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cool, thanks everyone
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Unread 07-23-2009, 11:13 AM   #6
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Along with what StrawberrySiren said - you need a little more makeup, especially with her big red lips. But, otherwise, this is a wonderful cosplay! Wonder Woman is such a badass and you look great as her! :]
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Unread 07-23-2009, 07:20 PM   #7
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I know the costume at six flags is two pieces like yours, have you tried going over and looking at how they did some things? x3 I remember examining Batman's cape when I went >>; Discreetly though XP

But yea, some eye-make up so your lips won't bring in two much attention. Eye's are a woman's best features :3 Do it naturally. Try just putting thin eye liner on your top lid just to bring some attention to them. And of course like you mentioned your eyebrows x3
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Unread 07-23-2009, 08:18 PM   #8
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Well yeah, the belt should be completely different. But you know that. And just more makeup in general. You look fairly washed out. I also think a fuller wig would look better. Diana has pretty voluminous hair. You might could try just adding wefts to the one you have. And for that look I also want to say that more seams on the corset would add to it. And I might could tell better from other pictures but the gold design at the top might could benefit from sort of of interfacing too.

Anyways keep on at it, its nice to see other Amazons around here!
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Unread 07-27-2009, 01:16 AM   #9
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I think you make a great Wonder Woman! And if you spruce it up a bit like some of the above users mentioned then you'd be unstoppable!
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