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Unread 08-21-2009, 11:33 PM   #1
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Yuna Gunner witha Scooby Twist

MUHAHA!
I've been wanting to do an "original" design for Yuna for a while and this is what i got:
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/b...n/108_0827.gif
I wanna know what yu people think, for instance how could i improve it?
I do still need to make the little arm things (i just thought of that) and i'm gonna cut my hair shorter soon so it looks a liittllee better (and make the earing! >.<)
eventually i will have more better pix than this one, but the back of it was falling off so i could only get a front shot, i do have an orange hood on it, but my hairs in the way

anyone have any other ideas?

heres some "refrence" pictures
http://ilovezsora.deviantart.com/art...tume-133533941 <- my original design, which was obvious not followed as much as i would have liked
http://images.wikia.com/finalfantasy...unaGunner.jpeg <- original yuna gunner outfit
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I really like it! I love how you took an original turn with it but didn't completely deviate from the original design.

Maybe make the shawl on the side a litte longer, and have it sit a little higher on your waist so that it'll flare out a bit more. I'm not a fan of the shoes, as there's too little black in the outfit, in my opinion, to have black shoes. Maybe do something like Daphne's go-go boots instead.

Other than that, as well as the things you mentioned, it looks good.
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Unread 08-23-2009, 01:19 AM   #3
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I really like it! I love how you took an original turn with it but didn't completely deviate from the original design.

Maybe make the shawl on the side a litte longer, and have it sit a little higher on your waist so that it'll flare out a bit more. I'm not a fan of the shoes, as there's too little black in the outfit, in my opinion, to have black shoes. Maybe do something like Daphne's go-go boots instead.

Other than that, as well as the things you mentioned, it looks good.
thank you!^^
I'll try to fix up the side skirt a little bit, ok!
as for shoes, i think the problem is that theres no color on them maybe.. hhmmm....
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Unread 08-23-2009, 06:36 AM   #4
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Aaw, that's really cute! ^_^ When I read that title, I had to look. xD

I think it would look better with lace-up boots, honestly... Plain ones kind of take away from the Yuna-ness, to me. I can't tell if you put the paw prints on the skirt on your actual costume, but I think that would look really nice and pull it all together. Also, do you/do you plan to have a hairtail? I think that would do wonders for recognition, and you could make the wrapping all brown, or something, so it'd look like Scooby's tail.
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Unread 08-23-2009, 07:56 PM   #5
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I like the idea. A cross of Final Fantasy and Scooby Doo. Brilliant 8D And it looks pretty good so far.

I agree with Kazephyr about the hairtail. Makes it more recognizable, and having it brown would look like Scooby's tail. That'd really bring the costume together I think. If you have a prop, you could even have something associated with Scooby Doo on it. Like perhaps, a paw print, the SD, or even the shape of a Scooby snack.
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I think it looks really good. It is a good idea.
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