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Unread 09-29-2003, 06:31 PM   #1
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Battle Royale

Here is my Battle Royale uniform (from the movie, not the book or manga). I was going to base it on a character, but have blonde hair ^^;

The blood was made with Rit Dye and Halloween costume blood. The collar is not perfect, but it was made from a wholesale-giant-can of vegetables or something. I would have worn the jacket, but atlanta is damn hot x.x;

Please tell me what you think.
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Unread 09-29-2003, 11:47 PM   #2
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You might want to try to iron the pleats into the skirt, or somehome make them a little more noticeable.
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Unread 09-29-2003, 11:54 PM   #3
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Way to do the map.
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Unread 09-30-2003, 08:12 PM   #4
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The pleats should be... ah... what's the word I'm thinking of... deeper @_@ Sharper, something like that. And I can't see any white ruffly-ness under the skirt.
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Unread 09-30-2003, 08:21 PM   #5
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In addition to what the other people said, there needs to be a pretty S on the tie. Lemme show ya some piccus (just in case you want to add it).
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Unread 09-30-2003, 08:33 PM   #6
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As for the ties *spamspamspam* I'm making and embroidering the "s" onto ties if anyone wants them, they're 20 bucks for anyone who hasn't gotten in and order for animagic. Here's what they look like!

http://images.cosplay.com/showphoto....t=500 &page=1
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Unread 10-01-2003, 04:28 AM   #7
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The pleets need to be crisper and you need to be able to see the white underskirt. If you want to go for real accuracy, the skirt laces up on both sides and ties, with round beads on the end, with matching khaki ties. Also, the "S" symbol on the tie needs to be added. It can be done by embriodery or paint. I embriodered mine by hand and it turned out pretty blah =\

You have the right attitude, and the fact that you put in the effort to make the map rules, I didn't even do that.
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Unread 10-13-2003, 05:13 AM   #8
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rip shirt? rip skirt?
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Unread 10-13-2003, 06:38 AM   #9
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basically a repeat of what was said by Yuna. The skirt if you want super acurracy(sp?) I know I sat and watched the movie 6 million times to make sure that I wasn't seeing things with the laces up the side.

I just downloaded my map of some site...don't remember which one and printed it out at Kinko's. So if you made the map that is neat.

Oh the collar of the shirt should be rounded. The type of collar is called a Peter Pan collar. I just sipped the edges and sewed them back up.

Other than that great try. Most people don't even put much effort in it. ^_^
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Unread 10-13-2003, 11:00 AM   #10
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hey if u eventually find the map...post the link for the rest of us ^_^
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Unread 10-13-2003, 09:13 PM   #11
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I actually have my collar here and an up close tie logo here:
http://forums.cosplay.com/showpost.p...6&postcount=13


I have the map all you have to do is PM me and I can send it to you. I can't find the link where I D/L it. Who ever it was...god bless them.
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Unread 10-25-2003, 08:47 AM   #12
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I always thought the embroidered letter on the tie was a B, since they're in class B...


Good job on the costume, the blood looks really good. I'll have to remember that mixture, any time I try for a blood effect I always get a terrible pink color >.<
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Unread 10-30-2003, 02:46 AM   #13
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Battle Royal Map - with BR logo - I had one without it, gomen x.x;
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