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Unread 04-05-2011, 04:02 PM   #1
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Major Motoko Kusanagi

Major Motoko is one of my favorite characters of all time and I would love to know what my fellow cosplayers think of my WIP
There are 4 things I know I need to do for sure
1: Put the sleeve zippers on
2. Better hair styling (I was working an artist table and woke up late D
3. Make the correct gun
4. Make belt buckle/cover

Here are the ref. pics!
http://www.deviantart.com/download/1..._shayshady.jpg
http://img88.echo.cx/img88/7450/gitsexfig01013dg.jpg
http://www.godoon.com/gallery/media/...bfc396a36f.jpg

Here is a single pic and a link to my gallery


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Unread 04-09-2011, 12:31 PM   #2
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It looks really good. But based on the reference pictures the jacket seems to be grey instead of black and the hair a lighter shade of purple. Thats all I see everything else looks great!
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Unread 04-12-2011, 12:05 AM   #3
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False eyelashes would make the eyes pop more (mascara never seems to look right to me) since Major has sharp eyes.
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Unread 04-16-2011, 06:23 PM   #4
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it's gorgeous!!
the wig could use a bit more styling at the front though, like, with the bangs and the back part.
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Unread 04-17-2011, 03:41 PM   #5
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False eyelashes would make the eyes pop more (mascara never seems to look right to me) since Major has sharp eyes.
I agree with this. Also (if i remember right) Major has red eyes, coloured red contacts would make your eyes stand out even more ^.^ but if you're not comfortable with coloured contacts, or contacts in general, i think your costume is still awesome!

One more little detail you could wow people with is the plugin thingy on the back of their necks, i'm blanking the word for it right now though. like this http://img396.imageshack.us/img396/1391/major02yd8.jpg
especially when you take of your jacket, that would be awesome :3 just imo tho ( i've seen people draw it on with liquid eyeliner but you've gotta get the lines reaaaally straight and clean )
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Unread 04-18-2011, 09:45 AM   #6
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it is funny that you say that because i am actually getting that tattooed on next week so it will be perfect. The contacts yea i do really need to get those. it is so stupid when you actually have to wear contacts or glasses. i get bumed out when i have to buy colored ones b/c that is less money for my normal ones lol.
I never though of the eyelashes. Majors eyes didn't seem to need them to me i guess. i will give it a shot though. thanks for your help.
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it's gorgeous!!
the wig could use a bit more styling at the front though, like, with the bangs and the back part.
Oh lol it isn't a wig it is my real hair. like said i woke up late and I was running my artist table so i didn't have the time i wanted. but yes it really does.
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