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Unread 11-05-2003, 05:34 AM   #1
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Tsukasa

And here's my Tsukasa costume. The costume isn't made completely from scratch, but I think it's decent work for my very first costume. So, let me know what you think. Constructive criticism is very nice.

http://images.cosplay.com/showphoto....t=500 &page=1

Oh, and it isn't quite finished yet. I still need to trim the skirt (I need to get the fabric for it), and I have to fix the gloves and do the boots.
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Unread 11-05-2003, 10:54 AM   #2
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The sleeves on the hoodie are a bit too long, and the neckline on the hoodie is actually supposed to be square, not curved. Your hat is also a little inaccurate. Other than that, it's a great try for a first costume! Your costume has the right amount of bagginess ^_^.
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Unread 11-05-2003, 08:42 PM   #3
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I love it!! I think it's very good!! Hope the staff turns out good!!
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Unread 11-06-2003, 02:48 AM   #4
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Hey yeah that's a really nice costume especially for it beining your first one. Other than the sleeves on the hooded part being a little long and the neckline being square, it's very nice. ^^
Good luck on the staff!

*Lol okay it was jus the light which made the hat look purple, either that or my eyes need checking ^^;
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Unread 11-06-2003, 02:15 PM   #5
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The sleeves should be pretty easy to fix, just annoying, cause I'll have to take the brown sleeves off to do a good cut of the outer sleeves....Those things were such a pain to sew in to the shoulder.

And yeah, I should have made the neckline more of a square, I just...didn't. I think it slipped my mind when I started it and then I noticed later, then I forgot again. I'll probably be able to fix that eventually too! ^_^
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Unread 11-06-2003, 03:18 PM   #6
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Awww, it looks good!! Nice job on your first costume!

I'd love to see it, once you're finished! (i.e. Trimming the skirt and making the staff)

Keep up the good work!
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Unread 11-18-2003, 09:48 AM   #7
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thats good but you need a wig ^_^
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