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Unread 01-04-2012, 11:41 AM   #1
jinglebooboo
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KOS MOS what to fix

Hello everyone, was hoping to get a critique of my kos mos cosplay. I worked pretty hard on this cosplay, and I know there are for sure faults, but I am mostly looking for what other people notice so I know what to fix first. Be as harsh as you want, I can take it Also yes i know there is a hole in elbo ha ha, ignore that fault XD

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http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_8bboYCEIv2...COS_KosMos.jpg

the cosplay

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http://www.cosplay.com/photo/3128704/

front
http://www.cosplay.com/photo/3001009/
http://www.cosplay.com/photo/3128482/

back
http://www.acparadise.com/acp/picvie..._561073&s=2012

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Unread 01-14-2012, 01:31 PM   #2
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It looks okay to me. People see what they want to see and fill in the holes when there are any. No pun intended.
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Unread 01-16-2012, 07:14 PM   #3
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Really lovely cosplay! Well done! The only critique I would have for you is to work with the wig a little bit. The bangs could stand to be layered, and you could try to make her ahoges. Once again, overall a really fantastic cosplay.
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Unread 01-18-2012, 07:52 PM   #4
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Only things I can see is that the wig looks a little too dark and the hard parts look a little rough. Otherwise it looks good.
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Unread 01-18-2012, 10:41 PM   #5
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I really like it! It's a very excellently done cosplay! And my goodness, I wish I could wear something that showcased my butt that wonderfully. I'd be terrified and wearing spankies underneath, just in case some perv snuck up for an upskirt. . . but that's just me. >w>

Some things I noticed:

1.) This is really kind of minor, but I'd like to suggest thinning your eyebrows. KOS-MOS has really thin eyebrows, as showcased here. I love how you colored your eyebrows, though! It matches your wig just perfectly!

2.) Would there be any way to pad your breasts? I realize that there's a small side of your chest showing, but maybe it's just the angle of the photograph - but it seems as though the cups on the costume aren't holding much. I realize KOSMOS has. . . Huge breasts. I'm not saying mimic that, but if there were some way to make your chest slightly fuller and fill the cups slightly.

But other than that, everything looks pretty amazing! Wear that costume with pride, girlie!

By the way, I DIG the red contacts. You wear them really well!
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Unread 02-02-2012, 11:49 PM   #6
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I really like it! It's a very excellently done cosplay! And my goodness, I wish I could wear something that showcased my butt that wonderfully. I'd be terrified and wearing spankies underneath, just in case some perv snuck up for an upskirt. . . but that's just me. >w>

Some things I noticed:

1.) This is really kind of minor, but I'd like to suggest thinning your eyebrows. KOS-MOS has really thin eyebrows, as showcased here. I love how you colored your eyebrows, though! It matches your wig just perfectly!

2.) Would there be any way to pad your breasts? I realize that there's a small side of your chest showing, but maybe it's just the angle of the photograph - but it seems as though the cups on the costume aren't holding much. I realize KOSMOS has. . . Huge breasts. I'm not saying mimic that, but if there were some way to make your chest slightly fuller and fill the cups slightly.

But other than that, everything looks pretty amazing! Wear that costume with pride, girlie!

By the way, I DIG the red contacts. You wear them really well!
I second these two suggestions. Other than that I *really* love this costume, it is so well done! You are very talented missy!
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Unread 02-07-2012, 06:44 AM   #7
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Its simply stunning and very well done. I second December Wynn for the wig detailing. The wig looks a little thin but with very little work you could build up those bangs for the biggest anime buck! Btw, I never could beat that game, but I loved Kos Mos's design. Wish I had the guts to wear it XD
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