Awwwwwwww I think you very much do resemble Ashe!!!
Ashe is so awesome, I swear she's the only FF character that has curves! (don't hold me to that though, I've only played FFX and FFX-2)
I think it's a GREAT start!!!
My advice, the skirt looks a bit high and the black thing would look much better as blue denim. Have any old jeans you could cut up to make the middle thingy? Great job on the straps though