I don't see many crossplays with Celty that work but this does!
The only thing that sticks out to me is your boots. I would suggest lace ups or something that hug the shape of your leg. I don't think I would recommend any low cut shoes though.
Besides that, everything looks good! The helmet looks in proportion(something that most Celty cosplayers have trouble with) and looks good in general. As for the camel toe, I'm probably not much help since I'm female, but maybe some sort of athletic strap?