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Unread 09-22-2012, 10:51 PM   #1
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do i make a cute l?

plz tell me thanks

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Unread 09-22-2012, 10:57 PM   #2
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I like your makeup! So yes. ^_^
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Yeah, you look pretty good as L
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Unread 09-23-2012, 01:34 AM   #5
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Unread 09-23-2012, 01:44 AM   #6
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I think you CAN. Now you may wonder why I say this, as everyone is just saying yes you do..I say CAN because there are things that make you not look like him. The hair could use better styling. That's really it though..I think if you make the hair more with spikes you will make a great L. I know it's not the "yes" you were probably going for, but I'm also not gonna sit here and lie to you. Your face makes a good L, so that is a plus. And you seem to have the emotion/facial expression he has all the time.
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Unread 09-23-2012, 01:57 AM   #7
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thank you i love a little critisism i'll post a new ( better) pick later
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Unread 09-23-2012, 01:59 AM   #8
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Awesome I will keep an eye on the thread then. Can't wait to see it. By the way, this may get moved to the Costume Critique forum..Just so you know..You may come back to this forum and go "WTF WHERE'D IT GO, but if so, that's where..lol
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ty im totally new first 1 ever
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I know lol That's why I mentioned it. So now you won't wonder haha
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Unread 09-23-2012, 03:06 AM   #11
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better?
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Unread 09-23-2012, 03:22 AM   #12
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Uhh... To be perfectly honest I dislike your wig. It kind of looks like a party wig to me, may also be the lighting though.. Also the bangs seem to be cut way to short. :/
You should probably also draw your eyebrows in black to match the hair.

It's an easy cosplay, so you have to be careful withthe details. But I'm sure you CAN do it!
Hope my non-sugarcoated opinion doesn't bother you, I'm sure it's not exactly what you wanted.^^"
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Unread 09-23-2012, 04:24 AM   #13
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Uhh... To be perfectly honest I dislike your wig. It kind of looks like a party wig to me, may also be the lighting though.. Also the bangs seem to be cut way to short. :/
You should probably also draw your eyebrows in black to match the hair.

It's an easy cosplay, so you have to be careful withthe details. But I'm sure you CAN do it!
Hope my non-sugarcoated opinion doesn't bother you, I'm sure it's not exactly what you wanted.^^"
This.

Also vary your poses and get better pictures other than webcam shots as it doesn't do the cosplay any justice.
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Unread 09-23-2012, 08:12 AM   #14
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Nah not really...

Also about the colouring of eyebrows: L actually doesn't have eyebrows so it's more necessary to cover them up (: Or at least that's what I've gathered from all the DN-threads (:
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Unread 09-23-2012, 09:24 AM   #15
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The wig is bad, party wigs are not good for cosplay. If you have access to Ebay you can purchase a better wig for around the same price if you look around. Try your hand at the auctions to get a cheaper price (instead of buy now option).

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