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Unread 02-02-2014, 12:41 PM   #1
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This costume has been done for a while, and i have had nice pictures taken for my website and such...but i still can help but think there is room for improvement...so here i am looking for your critique.

let me know what you think...be super honest...if something is crap i would like to know so i can fix it lol XD
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Unread 02-02-2014, 06:15 PM   #2
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Looks amazing!!!! It looks really well constructed, and you could really keep it like that if you wanted to.

Possible improvement suggestions:
-Straighten the wig a little so it lies a little straighter or trim long bangs into it (I'm unsure of which version you're going for, anime or books)
-Add more detail to the bottom of the underskirt

Your metal pieces look beautiful and you also chose your fabrics very well.
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Unread 02-02-2014, 06:51 PM   #3
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I agree with KnightJeran that it does look really amazing so far. Trinity Blood cosplay is really hard to pull off (I'm in the process of attempting Cardinal Sforza myself), but you've done well so far. I would say that maybe the habit should fit a little closer to your head, something a few extra bobby pins could fix easily. And then the collar part at your shoulders, the little bib piece, it feels like it sticks off your shoulders just a bit too much, but not enough that I would think it detracts from the piece. I could just be the way you are sitting/standing that made it feel that way. Beyond those two little things, you've done a lovely job.
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Unread 02-03-2014, 05:20 PM   #4
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Very well done.
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