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Unread 12-19-2012, 06:13 PM   #1
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Yuki Cross/Kuran First Time Cosplay

Okay so this is the first cosplay I conjured up and I'm entering it into a masquerade next year.
I really just want to know what people think and how I can improve it as I want to do my best. It will be my first comp and cosplay at a convention and well ye get me point.

So I did Yuki Kuran/Cross ( I did her as a Pure Blood so idk what name she has)
btw. Excuse my orange face and bad photography.

Yeah erm just a note. I have a wig for this cosplay but at the time the photos were taken I didn't have it so aye. Thats why am not wearing it here.


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Unread 12-19-2012, 06:22 PM   #2
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Were you the one that posted in this thread before about how the scythe looked and we gave a lot of advice? Just wondering..I couldn't find the thread..lol

Anyway, Looks amazing! Though, I would say if you aren't wereing a wig, get one..If you ARE..get a new one lol

It looks like that is your natural hair. Her hair is darker and not so straightly cut in the bangs like yours. and her side burns/side bangs area is the same length as the rest of her hair..Anyway other then that everything looks spot on..You even got correct boots!!
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Yeah that was me!! Such a long time ago! Wow but yeah. My hair then was cray! The dye had washed out the ends so bad and it just looked weird. I have a wig I just didn't have it when these photos were taken. I forgot to mention that actually.

Thanks though. Funny about the boots actually I got them as a lucky find from this shop was was closing down. I got em real cheap and they;re so perf.

When I cut the wig properly I will upload the pictures and then we can sort that out too!
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Unread 12-19-2012, 07:44 PM   #4
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Thought so..But like your name, you use to have a picture of Kaien right? lol
I would love to see a pic with the wig when you get it finished!! Did you buy that cosplay? It's pretty good if you did..The material looks good (which is hard to get in bought stuff now lol)

Yea, no problem. What!! That's awesome!! I guess when you can find them you better get them huh lol
You could also go the extra step, and make her leg strap where she pits the staff. I believe she still has it durring the end of the series..Never saw it come off or anything haha

Also, I realized, i totally forgot that her hair is super long in this part of the series....Her bangs are also really long....So you won't want a meduim wig, but a long one..
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Unread 12-20-2012, 02:12 AM   #5
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Yeah haha my picture used to be Kaien :')
I made this cosplay actually. Well I say made. I bought things like regular jackets and shirts then modified them. I practically did the jacket from scratch though as I pulled it to bits that much it didn't look like a jacket! Hahaa but yeah I just need to add more bits by me so it wi class as 70% my work. I think I will add a strap for where the ate is do should be. I just need more stuff. But yeah. I will do the wig tonight and upload it!
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Unread 12-21-2012, 05:27 PM   #6
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Wow, that prop is awesome.
Your cosplay is great, but i guess i only things you could add would be the over the knee socks and maybe a dark brown wig. Otherwise I think its really cool.
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Wow, that prop is awesome.
Your cosplay is great, but i guess i only things you could add would be the over the knee socks and maybe a dark brown wig. Otherwise I think its really cool.

Thanks for the advice!

Since the pictures were taken I did actually get both those things which is awesomee))
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