Your grammar was perfect, actually! Aside from that last sentence, but I do the same thing from time to time. :3 Welcome to Cosplay.com! I'm CosplayerKirito, self appointed greeter, so to speak. Not actual staff though, so don't assume that. Haha!
You'll love this place, it's great. So many guides to help you on your way to cosplay awesomeness. I'm a rather inexperienced cosplayer myself but this site has helped me so much already, so I'm sure you'll find lots here to help you too!
[i]Kirito (Aincrad, not ALO)
Ino Yamanaka 75%
(Need wig cut and styled)