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Unread 03-06-2013, 09:17 PM   #1
KarakuriVitti
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Asuna SAO - Fairy Dance Arc Top and Skirt

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I would just like some quick critique! I am mainly concerned about how I look in this cosplay in general, since I was feeling a bit' insecure with it. I'm used to wearing cosplay that covers my entire body, so I just wanted to make sure everything kind of looked right in it's proportions and that it was acceptable for asuna's character. The details I know I am missing are the remaining ribbons around her ankles, her wings and the jewelry on her ears- those are details I plan to add in.

http://karakurivitti.deviantart.com/gallery/42388828

Unfortunately I only have close-up pictures of me laying down. <<; I have some of me standing, but they're distance and their outline is rather blurry, but as a whole, do I look acceptable? I don't want to come off as showing too much or the outfit not fitting me, since I'm not too fond of unwanted attention at cons. Although I guess I'll always be with a group to avoid that anyways...

But yes, input, or anything else you notice would be nice. Anything about the stitching you notice that you dont like, anything. c: Thank you.
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Unread 03-08-2013, 05:08 PM   #2
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I think it looks good but maybe you need to clean it up a little. I noticed that there is a little fraying on the top you might want to trim or something next time. But I really like this
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Unread 03-10-2013, 09:26 PM   #3
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the only thing i might change is the bangs on the wig. not super close to her's but i like how these look on you.
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Unread 03-10-2013, 10:18 PM   #4
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Looks very nice! I agree that the top needs to be hemmed or lined or something though to stop the fraying. Other wise it's great! (:
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