I would move the part an inch or two over. Think of aligning it roughly with your pupil. You might want to take pictures from a few more angles, too.
The bangs look really bulky right now (moving the part will solve some/maybe all of that - and it might just be the angle).
If you want more volume and the whole "anime hair" thing that's going on, you accomplish it basically by spraying/setting it while it's backward and letting it drape forward. It's like if you took a shower and slicked your hair back to dry - it would do that when it falls forward.
If you want to do the "anime hair", I wouldn't cut anything since it will take away some of the length.
Well, that was the critique - I think it looks pretty good as-is and would certainly be recognised, it just depends on how much you want to fuss.