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Unread 04-21-2013, 10:40 AM   #1
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Hey!
I am currently working on my latest costume for Anime Boston's Hall Cosplay Contest. I was hoping that you could give me some possible critiques =).

I am making Yukari's Fashion Show Gown made by George and the crew. I made a couple changes to the look because I have seen some amazing cosplays of this gown and I wanted to make it my own. First, the design is made entirely out of rhinestones, 30,000 to be exact in the skirt alone. Originally, the dress was made in Isabella's pearls. I changed the drape and silhouette of the skirt to look more like victorian ball gown. I also added bows to the pickups to the skirt to give the pickups a finished quality.

If you could be so kind as to give me your comments and opinions, I would really appreciate it! Thank you soooooo muchhhhhh!

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My Costume-
http://www.cosplay.com/costume/453858/

*Edit 4/26- Bodice Photos have been added to my gallery =)
*Edit 5/1- More Photos of the bodice have been added!
*Edit 6/2- A finished image of the dress is added to my Gallery!!!!

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Unread 04-21-2013, 01:07 PM   #2
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It's quite beautiful, and your attention to detail is amazing. Although you've made some changes it still looks like it fell out of the pages of Ai Yazawa's manga. *^* Please post updates when you finish the bodice?
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Unread 04-22-2013, 04:19 PM   #3
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The detailwork on this is stunning. 0_0. Seriously cannot wait to see more updates.
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Unread 04-26-2013, 11:49 PM   #4
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@Throat- THANK YOU! That is very settling to hear =)

@Touch- THANKS!! I just added images of the bodice!

The bodice is 70% finished....I need to apply the ruffles, the straps, the lining, and the zipper. The sleeves will be a separate monster =)
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Unread 04-27-2013, 12:27 PM   #5
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Love, love, LOVE.
I am actually cosplaying Yukari soon.. But her school uniform.
Your dress is beautiful, it looks like it is straight from the anime.. >u<
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Unread 04-30-2013, 11:43 PM   #6
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Love all of beadwork on the bodice! The seam lines are so clean. *_*
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Unread 05-01-2013, 07:13 PM   #7
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More Progress has been added to the Gallery =) Thanks Everyone!!!!!!
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Unread 05-05-2013, 12:23 PM   #8
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So stunning. *_* The slimming at the waist is incredible(really random I know XD) The ruffles are very nice and fit very well with the rest of the dress.
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Unread 05-16-2013, 10:20 PM   #9
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it gorgeous!!! its really amazing @_@ i have this dress in my list of cosplays to do...and i can only hope it looks as good as yours
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Unread 06-02-2013, 06:26 PM   #10
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Hey Guys!
Thanks for all you love, support, and comments! Anime Boston was a BLAST! Acting like a model all weekend was super-duper fun, even though the 6" heels cracked both my toenails and gave more blisters than I can count.....FUN!

Finished gown- http://www.cosplay.com/photo/3392200/

Here is a video of the gown in action- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2kJV3LdmaeY

SOOOOO MANY SPARKLES!!!!

If you see anything that needs fixing, please let me know so I can fix her before Otakon!
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Was so excited to see this in person I wasn't even sure what to say; I was sitting right next to you for the walk-ons. You were absolutely fantastic and it was amazing to see you go across the stage with all of the sparkling from the lights
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Unread 06-03-2013, 09:04 AM   #12
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It is gorgeous! *_* I really hope I run into you at Otakon so I can see this in person.

I'm guessing you are ignoring all of the roses in the hair and such?
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Unread 06-03-2013, 06:30 PM   #13
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@Reilala- THANK YOU!!! It was wonderful meeting you! Congratz on your award!

@Touchmon- Im sure you will find me; just look for a big, blue, sparkly disco ball! =P I chose to make the tiara, necklace, and earrings which were confiscated by the faculty prior to the show. The roses were an improvised last minute decision made by George =)
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Unread 06-20-2013, 03:43 PM   #14
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Pft, it could be much better.....

Yeah, I am totally kidding! The detail is amazing! The bead work and the corset! Everything is perfect, i am excited for when it is totally done
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It's a perfect execution. As far as I can see, between the image you provided and your progress, it's amazing. Good job!
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