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Unread 05-11-2013, 09:28 PM   #1
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Cana from Fairy Tail

Looking for tips and idea to make this crossplay better :3

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Unread 05-12-2013, 09:39 PM   #2
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Nice job overall with the crossplay.

While clow cards are awesome, try to find a deck of tarot cards, since those are are more in line with the types she uses in her magic.

It'd be cool to see a pose with the guild symbol on the belly, though I could imagine you'd be saving the guild stamp tatoo for a con or what not.

Her feather bag/satchel would be a cool accessory as well if you can find or manufacture that somehow.

Keep up the good work!
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Unread 05-13-2013, 09:46 AM   #3
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I also agree, nice job overall. ^_^

I also agree with Meb9000 about not using the tarot cards. I did a quick search and they don't look too hard to make.

Another thing I noticed is that her bra is a darker blue than what you have. You also need thicker bangles. Her capris also seem to be more on the red side than brown.

And this might be really nitpicky but her hair seems to part more from the right side than the middle although I understand that could be hard to do with a wig.
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