I would agree with some of the downward angle comments Brea made. Its really predominant on the Female!Thor photo, if her arms were a bit over to one side you could see down her shirt and thats not cool/not flattering.
I commend you on trying the unique angle, and I like the composition of photo 2599. I feel like some of your photos could be lightened up either during shooting or in post process because sometimes detail is lost in them (looking at you photo 610 + 525), also indoors you have some color casts going on, another thing you could try to correct in PS or by shooting in daylight or adjusting White Balance.
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