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Unread 06-30-2013, 02:42 AM   #1
Slapthefatcat
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Yashio Kaito cosplay.

I made a Yashio Kaito (Robotics; Notes) cosplay and it looks... off. I was wondering if you cool guys and gals could tell me what I can do to improve it. (I plan to get real red/white shoes, tablet holster, and I will be using my actual tablet when I do the read cosplay, as well as a better color pants).
This is the first whole wearing of the costume, so be aware it's not going to be perfect.

Ref: Here. Here. And here.
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Things I know: No tablet, no tablet holster, pants wrong color, shoes not quite right, real tablet needed.
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Unread 07-07-2013, 11:22 PM   #2
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It's pretty good. Your white shirt is a little see-through-y I guess, so you can see where the shirt has layered fabric, but otherwise, I don't see anything.
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Unread 07-08-2013, 12:19 AM   #3
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I think your pants could be a bit less baggy.
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