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Unread 04-02-2004, 09:28 AM   #1
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Marlene, the unsung character from FFVII

Ok folks here is my Marlene costume from FFVII. The ribbon needs to be fixed a bit but what do you think? I used a purple dress since in the FMV its purple XD; So what do you think?
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Unread 04-06-2004, 12:07 AM   #2
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That is sooooooo cute. I love the idea. I don't think I've ever seen Marlene cosplayed before!!

The first thing that catches my eye is the wrinkly bottom hem... I think it would look more neat if that were corrected. Also, consider moving the bow up to the collar of the dress instead. You might also want to even the bow out (make the two tails even with one another) to make it look a little more tidy. Maybe consider even stiffening it up a little, with some starch or something.

And other than that, I think it looks really nice! If you ever decide to go back and do anything different, be sure to post new pics ^_^
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Unread 04-06-2004, 07:53 AM   #3
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yes i agree the bow should be moved up near your collar, and maybe you can add one or two buttons in the front of the dress, other than that, nice
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http://images.cosplay.com/showgaller...sword=&pag e=
Thats a link to just my Marlene pics!! Feel free to leave comments lol XD;. Just took them today! And see? I added the buttons! ^_^
But thank you so much for the suggestion!!
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