Your bow looks lovely. Good width and length of tails.
Like the poses.
Nice length of skirt
Nice spotless legs. (I can say that cause I don't have scarless legs)
Curly hair works for you. I see you added her front tendrils.
Your gloves look nice. They are the right length for the manga version. If anyone does anime version they go over your elbow
Nice choker and tiara!
What you need is a skirt that flairs a bit more. Mikazuki gave you a nice pattern to work with.
Your sleeves should be half circles. Love Meeko has a little guide on her site here: Sleeves!
Just go to Eceteras. It's easy.
You need bangs. That's not hard to find, There are many wig shops that sell just a clip that you place in your hair for bangs. They are usually cheap too!
Or if you are feeling ambitious you can make your own with extentions, caulk, and tape. Katie Bair has instructions on how to do that.
And you need boots. Find some cheap ones in the right style. You can spray them green with leather paint they sale at shoe repair shops. Then add white laces.
Also the waistline should puff out a bit. But I'm not really sure how to help with that one. I think it's hard.