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Unread 06-09-2004, 12:34 AM   #1
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Summoner Yuna(My first costume)

This is my very first costume. Iv'e got to make the 2 long blue beads,the earring,buy the necklace,and make my obi stiffer .It WAS finished but my earring broke and so did those 2 long blue bead things.(They broke at A-kon ) It was fault though I should of attached them better. But anyway what do you think?(You may have to copy paste)

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Unread 06-09-2004, 02:46 AM   #2
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Cool

*thumbs up* It looks really good! ^_^
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Unread 06-09-2004, 11:08 AM   #3
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Nice detailing! Was it all hand painted?
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Unread 06-09-2004, 01:11 PM   #4
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Yeah. It took forever trying to mix the right colors for everything. I kinda screwd up on the skirt though.
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Unread 06-09-2004, 02:19 PM   #5
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I don't have all the details of Yuna's costume memorized...but is the black 'bra' thing supposed to show that much under the front wrap? Maybe the wrap needs to be a bit more generous...
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Unread 06-09-2004, 03:29 PM   #6
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Looks really nice! A friend of mine is making summoner Yuna! *lol* I like what you did with the obi, I think that's the best part. Are you going to make a staff? ^_^ Or do you already have it? Or maybe it's there in the picture, and I'm crazy. ^.^;;

Anyway, looks nice!
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Unread 06-09-2004, 04:00 PM   #7
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sarcasm-hime your right it is showing too much and I already know I need to fix it.I gona put some stichtes at the crossings once I get around to it.

and fullmoonbunny thank you! I put card board into the Obi to make it really stiff.(I still need to put some more around the top. And no I do not have a staff yet but I plan on making one before my next con.Probably Nirvana
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Unread 06-09-2004, 04:01 PM   #8
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I agree with Sarcasm that the white over-wrap needs to cover your breasts more... the black should barely peek out. Go for the appearance that the white is holding the weight of your chest, and the black is just kind of under there. (the side view at A-kon photo looks better than your cosplay member gallery one does, as far as the chest wrap goes, so maybe there's nothing wrong and the front view just looks wonky :P)
Its beautiful! I LOVE the skirt, and the gradient on the sleeves. The best Yunas always seem to have lovely skirts... The Obi is super pretty too *_* shiiny
(you know, i think I may have seen you at A-kon and thought you were the best Yuna there! lol)

Curl out your hair! Style to look like Yuna, your hair is a great length to do so. Using makeup would really help to light up your face in the photographs. You need to be happy Yuna all the way to your face and hair!
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Unread 06-09-2004, 07:58 PM   #9
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awesome! Totally awesome! that's extremely well done for your first costume! *gives you thumbs up* nice job ^_^ keep up the good work.

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Unread 06-10-2004, 11:47 AM   #10
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I would of styled my hair but... I was already running late at getting to my friends house and we were out of hairspray so I figured that it wouldn't of really mattered.
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Unread 06-10-2004, 02:12 PM   #11
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Wow!

Wow! That`s really good! Especially for a first cosplay! The handpainting detail is amazing! The only thing is (In agreeing with someone else...forgot name already. ^.^; ) I think the black part should be hidden a little more under the white. But, geez, I wish I could handpaint like that! Excellent JoB!
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Unread 06-10-2004, 04:04 PM   #12
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Awesome!!! You're sure this is your first cosplay? 'Cause it's so great!



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Unread 06-10-2004, 05:03 PM   #13
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That is fantastic, the painting you did really is top notch! the back was all i would have mentioned, and others had done so. The skirt is fantastic, good craftsmanship!
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Unread 06-10-2004, 07:58 PM   #14
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Well just so you know the pic of me in my gallery. I was just slipping it on real quick so my grandma could get some pics.But like I said I'm going to make to were it will it won't do that anymore when I get around to it.
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Unread 06-13-2004, 02:34 AM   #15
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I finished fixing my earring does it look okay or should I work on it more?
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