Thank you both for replying, I appreciate it
@luna: I agree, I definitely need to find new fabric for the top as it was a last minute white t-shirt and some thin yellow fabric lol. And new shorts because the ones in the picture no longer fit unfortunately >_<
@Scunosi: Another poster on the critique form also recommended some more makeup, so I'll definitely look into that. And they also told me about a wig I should look into, and I like it a lot better than my current one. It's this one: https://www.epiccosplay.com/apollo-1...splay-wig.html
. Would that one be an improvement?
Thank you both again for your input