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Unread 12-20-2004, 06:24 AM   #1
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^^ This was the remade version.. Take a look at the previous version at my cosplay site~ X3 You can also take a look at my photo gallery~

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Unread 12-20-2004, 07:34 AM   #2
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Wow - great Lenne! I especially like how your boots and sleeves came out. It's hard to tell since the pics are from far away, but your hair beads look good as well.

After checking out your site, its definately a wonderful improvement from your original; the added white ruffles and sideskirt make a big difference!

My only real critique is a problem in both versions; the top looks a little too baggy, especially in the back near the bottom - you might want to take it in a bit.
Anyway, good job!
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Unread 12-20-2004, 10:05 AM   #3
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I think it looks very nice. I love the colors. ^^ Only thing I can tell is like ShivaBlizzard8 said, the top is a bit baggy.. and the skirt is a bit long for the design, but if you made it longer for personal comfort than that's fine too. XD; Otherwise I really like it. You have some of the better ruffles than what I've seen on the shirts of most Lenne/Songstress cosplayers. ^^
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Unread 12-21-2004, 03:58 AM   #4
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Thankew~ ^^

The top was measured wrongly. o.o Causing the "baggy-ness"
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Unread 12-21-2004, 02:09 PM   #5
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I really like it! I think there's another layer on the boots, though, on the toe and ankle. I made boot covers with elastic, but I can't tell you how I did it, because I really don't know... how I made them. -_-;
But overall, the top is a bit baggy, like others said... and I'd work on your arm wrappings. But it's still great! *kicks own songstress yuna costume under bed*
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Unread 12-22-2004, 02:10 AM   #6
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LOL! Yea, there's another cover, & mine were sewed on~ So they look weird. o.o
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